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Kiss me bloody.
Kiss me raw.
Slap me around.
Kick my jaw.

Kiss me stupid.
Kiss me sweet.
Cut my chest open.
Red lines so neat.

Kiss me stoned.
Kiss me bruised.
With a baseball bat.
Or steel toed boots.

Kiss me deadly.
Kiss me silent.
Kiss me secret.
Kiss me violent.
Kiss me lovely.
Treat me right.
Slit my throat.
Kiss me goodnight.
Kiss me goodnight.



Update: thanks for all the faves, guys! ive never had so many on a single poem! im flattered and happy!!! :)
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x-Spottypath-x Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful :heart:
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creepypasta98 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem its amazing
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Writer
thank you ^^
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samoholic Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Like.. I don't even know, this is nice, raw, screaming! It brings up a lot of emotions in me, mostly confusion, and not in a rude way, but when it concerns relationships. lol I'm not sure I'm making any sense, but it got me thinking, and feeling. Nicely done.
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Writer
thanks :)
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JB5112 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
Whew.... Wow... this is intense.
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
thanks you. means alot
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CutToTheSex Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
This is wild. Your poetry is fascinating.
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Writer
wow thank you. i love the attention your giving my poetry
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Alessandra-De-Luca Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i love this
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Student Writer
thank you so much! :)
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Alessandra-De-Luca Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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The-Warden-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my god I love this poem thank you
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Student Writer
your very welcome

i appreciate your love :P
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Anchor-Jealousy-On Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
kiss. ;}
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student Writer
lol ;) much appreciated
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rayne-rain Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
This is brilliant! :iconiloveitplz:
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
ur tooooo sweet!
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rayne-rain Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm being serious. Usually, I don't read literature on here, but as I was scanning through the deviations I just happened to read the first few lines and it was amazing. You're a genius. :iconohjoyzplz:
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student Writer
i cnt believe how kind everyone has been. this isnt my best work. if anything, its my worst.
i appreciate the compliments very much. but u guys flatter me toooooo much!
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rayne-rain Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student General Artist
It's good to have some endless flattery every now and then. :)
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NycaNyctophoba Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
wow boss :O
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
like a bawwwws!
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foxgirlie22 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012   Digital Artist
this is just awesome! i love it ;D
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
yay thank u. i cnt believe how much its blown up!
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foxgirlie22 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012   Digital Artist
well i can, thats usually what happens when something is just so wonderful:D
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
lol thx. u kno some guy just trolled me in a comment on this. its nice to kno some ppl r happy with it.
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foxgirlie22 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012   Digital Artist
your very welcome. and he was just trolling because he is an uncreative stick in the mud and was jelous of you:) but anyways keep up the good work!
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sugarsplash12 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this poem. It has a good rhythm and rhyme scheme, and also has a very bittersweet feel with the word "kiss" being used. It's a bit sadistic too, and seems like there is a story is behind it. I love it! :)
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
yay thank u for that compliment i appreciate it!
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jereiku Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
^^
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
^^ lol nuff said
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jereiku Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
yes :)
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heisbreakingmyheart Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is really good! I think that the short lines and the repetion of 'kiss me' make it really effective.
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
thank u. i appreciate that u read it. :)
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heisbreakingmyheart Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) You're welcome!
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linawifeofL Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
This really appeals to my S&M tendencies! <3
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Writer
lol ditto. u should read my other stuff, much more violent, much more lovely, much more erotic :)
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