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A stranger walked by a crying little girl,
Tear and blood stains on her sleeves
He asked, "Darling are you okay?" She nodded.
He took her heart and then took leave.

A small boy crossed the little girl,
Mascara crawling down her face,
He asked how she was and she sighed, "Fine."
He grabbed her toys and left with no trace.

A lonely mother glanced at the girl,
Bleeding out in the middle of the street.
She asked her nothing, too weighed down with grief,
And stole the shoes off the young girl's feet.

The girl's soul mate was crawling by,
Bleeding, in pain, with a fever hot.
When the girl lied and said she was okay,
He kissed her and whispered, "No you're not."
i wish, just wish someone would do that for me
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Allinost Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! It makes me want to be the kind of guy that says "No your not."
I really appreciate writers like you! Keep up the great work!
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! And thank you for the watch!
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Allinost Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you too!
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devotedwritter93 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
This is amazing! i love it!
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank u. its alot happier than my other work, if u like darker things check out the rest. :)
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devotedwritter93 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
I shall! :)
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
This poem is one of your best ones yet! I love it, keep writing. :D
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
wow thank u, i sure will!
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AlchemistEternal Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student General Artist
i really love this... it made my heart hurt good job!!!
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
yay heart pain?
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