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A stranger walked by a crying little girl,
Tear and blood stains on her sleeves
He asked, "Darling are you okay?" She nodded.
He took her heart and then took leave.

A small boy crossed the little girl,
Mascara crawling down her face,
He asked how she was and she sighed, "Fine."
He grabbed her toys and left with no trace.

A lonely mother glanced at the girl,
Bleeding out in the middle of the street.
She asked her nothing, too weighed down with grief,
And stole the shoes off the young girl's feet.

The girl's soul mate was crawling by,
Bleeding, in pain, with a fever hot.
When the girl lied and said she was okay,
He kissed her and whispered, "No you're not."
i wish, just wish someone would do that for me
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Allinost Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! It makes me want to be the kind of guy that says "No your not."
I really appreciate writers like you! Keep up the great work!
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! And thank you for the watch!
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Allinost Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you too!
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devotedwritter93 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
This is amazing! i love it!
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank u. its alot happier than my other work, if u like darker things check out the rest. :)
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devotedwritter93 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
I shall! :)
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therealanonymous Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
This poem is one of your best ones yet! I love it, keep writing. :D
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
wow thank u, i sure will!
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AlchemistEternal Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student General Artist
i really love this... it made my heart hurt good job!!!
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
yay heart pain?
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AlchemistEternal Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student General Artist
yes of course
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Shoujo-Slytherin Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
United by sorrow, bound by love. I love it. :heart:
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
awesome sauce!
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Shoujo-Slytherin Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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X-x-LoneWolf-x-X Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
I really love this OmO :heart:
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Student Writer
ur tooo nice!
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X-x-LoneWolf-x-X Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
^^; lol no problem
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Ah, united by pain, to me, that's a familiar topic. And it's an intriguing poem. :)
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
thank u for taking interest in it
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IndigoGirl239 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Ah how everyone wishes that no? To feel safe and loved...
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
exactly what i wish for
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:iconindigogirl239:
IndigoGirl239 Featured By Owner May 4, 2012
Of course. So do I
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SanityFallen Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, that was a really great poem. ^^ I liked the flow to it and the wrap up was nice
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
yay thank u. :)
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Husky-21 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
I love it!
The only thing is, she is a little girl with toys, but she wears mascara?
But you really did a great job!
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
yes. yes she does. lol.

My charcters tend to be teenagers stuck in a child-like phase of innocence.
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Husky-21 Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
I think we're all the same XD
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
and i think i agree.
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RoxasLoverForEver Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 *die* Love it TT^TT
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Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
thank u so much. btw i love ur icon, so cute :)if u like this u should check out my other work... its not usually this happy.
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RoxasLoverForEver Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Artist
ok :iconnomglompplz:
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:iconemerald-alexandria:
Emerald-Alexandria Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Writer
lol ur red happy face is violating my yellow one. im scared! XD
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RoxasLoverForEver Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Student Artist
nooo... is nomming it head XD lol violating XD *laugh* That was very epic win
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